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Key words: snowpack study, snow science, science writing,

science teaching, teaching technical writing

ABSTRACT

In thesection I teachof TechnicalWritingat PlymouthState
College in New Hampshire, students learn to handle the
content, form, and style of scientific reports by writing
about a snowpack.In this context, snowpackstudy requires
students to learn and apply only elementary concepts of
snow physics, but it establishes common experiences in
science for students with non-scientific backgrounds.
During an initial field trip, students examine the layers in
a snowpackandobservethevarious characteristics of snow.
For two weeks after the first field observations, students
study local weather history and learn basic concepts of
snow science,snow stratigraphy,andsnowmetamorphism.
Based on their new understanding of snow, they hypoth-
esize what changes have probably occurr ed in the
snowpack, andtheylearn to identifytypes of snowparticles
in the field. Duringa secondfield trip, studentsre-examine
the snowpack, compare their hypotheses with actual
conditions they observe, and account for persistence and
change in the snowpack during the two week interval. At
each stagein the snowpack study unit, students keep a log
of their observations and write uptheir findings in a series
of technical reports. They also keep a journal of their

experiencesand write essays in which they examine their
personal experience in snowpack study and assess the
snowpack study unit. Finally, they compile their reports,
then edit and polish them.
THE RATIONALE FOR SNOWPACK STUDY

Consider winter as a classroom, limited not by walls, but
only the imaginations of those who venture forth.
H a lfpe nny a nd O z a nne - Winte r, a n Ec o lo g ic a l H andb o o k

Informal surveys among my students at Plymouth State
College in New Hampshire suggest that many people are
poorly informed about snow. They ignore it, deplore it, or
see it only as an adjunct to a sport or play.
A student of mine told me he had never thought much
about snow: "I knew it was white and fluffy and some-
times it was compactible (good for snowball fights, and
snowmen)." His only thoughts about snow were "how
beautiful it was, how great it was to ski and snowmobile
on, how much I enjoyed playing in the snow, and how
much of a pain it was to shovel the driveway." Beauty,
play, sport, nuisance--thatsummarizes the experience of
most people with snow. Snow has lain all around them,
but people have never examinedits structureor the agents
that changeit.
This indifferenceto snowpermeatesour educationalsys-
tem as well. My survey of dozens of school science texts
and scienceprojectsdescribed in print andon the Internet
show that teaching about snow in the schools has been
neglected. Typical school science projects have students
merely draw andcutout snowflakes or determinethe water
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content of snowflakes by melting a can of snow. Many
school science textbooks fail to mention snow altogether.
The motto seems to be, "When the crickets die, bring the
science indoors." I want to help changethat view.
Capitalizing on this neglectof snow science, I haveused
snowpack study four times in my course in TechnicalWrit-
ing (EN309) at Plymouth State College. This is a junior-
level course designed to introduce students from various
academic departments to technical and scientific writing.
Although I limit the study to the physical characteristics
of snow on flat ground, snowpack study in this course
provides students ample opportunity for extensive
observation, interpretation, and reporting.
THE AIMS OF SNOWPACK STUDY

At the beginning of the course, I state the aims of the
snowpack study unit as follows:

Aim 1. Learn and use scientific procedures. Students
conduct scientificinvestigation through aseries of field
tests.

Aim 2. Learn andapply scientific knowledge. Students
quickly learn the fundamentals of a new science.

Aim 3. Learn to interpret data. Students integrate their
knowledge and experience.

Aim 4. Create and participate in a scientific commu-
nity. Students work individually and collaboratively.

Aim 5 Communicate about science to the wider scien-
tific community. Studentscreate written texts and visu-
als in various modes for varied audiences.

Aim 6. Develop personal qualities . Students develop
skills, attitudes, values, and goals appropriate for a sci-
entist.
THE BENEFITS OF SNOWPACK STUDY

Snowpack study makes students more aware of their envi-
ronment. Because our students live on the third of the
earth's surface where snow falls, they can study a snow-
pack on their own college lawn with a minimum of equip-
ment; they can study it individually or in a group. And
because snowpack study has not been widely used in our
schools, it is a fresh topic. Students discover things they
hadlittle suspected.Althoughsnowpackstudy is presented
in this course as pure science and as a subject for writing,
it also prepares studentsto understandapplicationsof snow
science in glaciology, avalanche studies, ecology, or
hydrology, as well as to participate more safely in winter
sports. Whetherviewed as pure scienceor appliedscience,
snowpack study encourages wider understanding of one
of nature's most interesting materials.
One value of snowpack study in a technical writing
course is that it provides a common experience in science
among students with limited technical backgrounds. No
member of the class is likely to know anything about the
subject, so everyone starts off even. Snowpack study is
suitable for these students because meaningful study of
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